| However, because it insisted on poetic technique, and did not allow poems with extra syllables, it left behind the traces of artificial polishing, so that many poems failed to achieve true beauty. |
しかし、詩的工夫に固持し、「字余り」も辞さなかった結果、入念な彫琢が造作の痕跡を残し、流麗な調べに欠ける歌も多い。 |